How do you Haiku?

3 years ago by LostInSpaaaace to c/writing

Share a haiku about your day!

A moment of peace,

That's all that I'm asking for,

Please go to bed now.

sweetcuppincakes 5 points 3 years ago

Stressed out about work, but at least today I had breakfast for dinner

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neamhsplach 2 points 3 years ago

There's something really relaxing about this one. I love it.

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slampisko 2 points 3 years ago

Haha, this applies to me too!

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woteorin 5 points 3 years ago

Two trips to the store—
Because I forgot TP—
Under a warm sun.

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AstralWeekends 4 points 3 years ago

Car brought to the shop,

dented, scratched, needing repair.

Aren't we all, sometimes?

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Tin 3 points 3 years ago

I wrote a haiku
In the dada style, but it's
A little creepy

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This is a true story. I compose dadaist poetry (I use a method similar to Burroughs' cut-up method, so phrases rather than single words, usually) and sometimes I do haikus. I composed a random haiku for this prompt but it came out much darker than I anticipated, so I wrote the above one the old fashioned way, and I'll share that instead.

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LostInSpaaaace 1 point 3 years ago

I'm not familiar with dadaist writing. I can't speak for others but I'd like to hear your haiku.

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neamhsplach 3 points 3 years ago

Aren't the birds lovely,

Atop the sycamore tree

Singing their hearts out?

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