probably i should have gone with lines instead of stipples for shading and/or used finer point pen. but lives and learns right. it was pretty fun to try and i hope to get better at it so i can use scrolls for decorative borders & whatnot.
(edit to add: i know there's a flourish missing some shading but this is shitty art share after all)
You've actually got the overall form, curve and balance of the shapes down really well here. I actually quite like the way you've done the shading, but yeah, worth trying some other options. Learning and improving is always a good thing :)
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