lemmy alts: @ludrol@szmer.info @ludrol@bookwormstory.social
it's even in a video form: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p2M8Y0z9Rl0
@rikka@ani.social <- Does the mention work from piefed?
I think ponko goes for Glico Man pose here
So the OP is still off key after whole 12 episodes. Nice touch that episode names were the 12 commandments of Gingarou Hotel. I really was expecting yachio to die today but not a fate worse than death:
Only 5 chapter's so far but it has already some great moments: Days Off In The Dragon's Stomach
I have read all 64 pages, and actually laughed out loud. After the first page that's quite an achievement.
For anyone coming after me: just read the last chapter. It's actually decent.
This "novel" is excellent exihibit of how humans can improve in their skill. From worst writing I have ever read to better than some published novels I had unpleastness of reading. Keep going as you will go places. Your skill has improved so much that it actually is a shame how bad the chapter 0 is.
In your place I would probably start over, and take a look how to structure a plot with twists and turns. Come up with a hook and first sentence of a book. As they say, that is most important sentence.
I love how sassy the catgirl is.
Mizu Mahou Gurai Shika Torie ga Nai Kedo Gendai Chishiki ga Areba - "Save the kid from terrible place" comfy adventure read. (Reading adventure genre is comforting me.) Better than cliche isekai but not outstanding.
Other than weekly discussion, and episode releases there are couple type of post that you could make.
Just finished 'Navigatoria' and it was so good throughout first 80% but climax ruined everything. The manga had some touching moments and some explorations of hard topics like nationalism, authoritarianism and rasism , but sadly they ware quite shallowly handled.
I think this was first time I read a climax that bad in my life. MC makes most out-of-character decision imaginable and next 2 events happen just to fix the plot and make happy ending possible.
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